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they say it’s clever when someone builds a ship in a bottle
i spent half my life in one and got no parades
i spent half my life in one and got no parades
Published 21st Feb 2022
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21st Feb 2022 8:04pm
Poignant, clever truth that echoes so palpably clear. It takes strength to pen such hard hitting humanity. I deeply appreciate you sharing yours with us.
Great ink.
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B
Great ink.
🌹 - 💙
B
29th Mar 2022 10:38pm
Just having a poke at the alcoholic ego Ms B. It’s a strange animal that barks at strange thing. Thanks for dropping in. 🙂
15th Sep 2023 6:09pm
Funny...to a point. Not so funny when it refers to a sad addiction (about which I experienced a bit myself with booze). Regards, Robert.
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