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Adjustment
Lubriciously abandoned, and corrupt,
I found the thoughts, you provoked, indecent;
Could you not catch how lust had slowly sucked
Each dissolute desire - it's prurient:
This news of sinful, salacious debaunch -
That disgusts in its decadence. Decay,
Implicit in these instincts, lets the raunch
Of your outlandish carnal aches, today,
Urge me to leave your concupiscent filth:
Smut that seemed perverse cannot suffice;
Lecherous libertine, despite your stealth,
You have not led me to lickerish vice;
Since I demurred , you lost lecherous lust;
Of course it's boring; still, I will adjust
I found the thoughts, you provoked, indecent;
Could you not catch how lust had slowly sucked
Each dissolute desire - it's prurient:
This news of sinful, salacious debaunch -
That disgusts in its decadence. Decay,
Implicit in these instincts, lets the raunch
Of your outlandish carnal aches, today,
Urge me to leave your concupiscent filth:
Smut that seemed perverse cannot suffice;
Lecherous libertine, despite your stealth,
You have not led me to lickerish vice;
Since I demurred , you lost lecherous lust;
Of course it's boring; still, I will adjust
Author's Note
Playing with words
mine (28.1.22) - let it be
mine (28.1.22) - let it be
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Re. Adjustment
11th Feb 2022 11:26pm
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Re. Adjustment
12th Feb 2022 8:57am
I very much like how your pieces have
a polished/organic structure with a tangible/intangible quality that engages in respiration.
Tis a unique experience in my perception
which is very cool.
Beautiful depth.
a polished/organic structure with a tangible/intangible quality that engages in respiration.
Tis a unique experience in my perception
which is very cool.
Beautiful depth.
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Re: Re. Adjustment
12th Feb 2022 11:57am
that is an interesting perspective - I always struggle a little with content and inovative thought - the stresses, rhymes and iambic pentameter in sonnets flow in my head fairly easily
Re. Adjustment
12th Feb 2022 1:18pm
Went back and forth on this one.
Brought you to the edge of perversion; but you reached a disembarkation point. Now that you are no longer being led, he's lost interest. Although you miss the thrill, you will adjust and be fine.
I had to look up a lot of words, so thanks for expanding my vocabulary.
Brought you to the edge of perversion; but you reached a disembarkation point. Now that you are no longer being led, he's lost interest. Although you miss the thrill, you will adjust and be fine.
I had to look up a lot of words, so thanks for expanding my vocabulary.
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12th Feb 2022 9:16pm
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13th Feb 2022 6:47am
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19th Feb 2022 2:48pm
This is tight, well crafted indeed. The rhyme schemes are not basic, they're well built.
And then take in the message of the words, it's a force of confidence. Solid.
Bravo, you.
And then take in the message of the words, it's a force of confidence. Solid.
Bravo, you.
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20th Feb 2022 3:08am
Re. Adjustment
28th Feb 2022 6:34pm
Adjust you must I trust even with utter disgust in the face of endless lust!!
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Re. Adjustment
21st Mar 2022 8:39pm
The lush vocabulary was such that I had to read it twice to indulge in the thought a bit deeper… mmmmm yea lol
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18th Jul 2022 12:47pm
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Re: Re. Adjustment
18th Jul 2022 12:46pm
thx - it did take some construction - I appreciate you sharing your enjoyment