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Rape
Oh she was so pretty
A spirited little filly
She screamed and shouted all night
So I knew I was doing something right
She wriggled and squirmed
Inside her was so warm
She kicked and punched
What a nice little cunt
We shared so much sentiment
but before I reached that moment
There was a word
That I heard
RAPE!!!!
A spirited little filly
She screamed and shouted all night
So I knew I was doing something right
She wriggled and squirmed
Inside her was so warm
She kicked and punched
What a nice little cunt
We shared so much sentiment
but before I reached that moment
There was a word
That I heard
RAPE!!!!
Written by
dangerousdesires
(TheVoicesAreWatching)
Published 9th Mar 2012
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Twisted,
10th Mar 2012 1:10am
Hmm, this is kind of dark, and having been on the losing side of this battle, I think it's great you're strong enough to write about it.. or to think about it.<3
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re: Twisted,
10th Mar 2012 1:17am
OMFG
11th Mar 2012 2:25pm
that is hard core but ddark and intresting at the same time! i love it
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Twisted with meaning...
11th Mar 2012 10:53pm
For me,and this is only my opinion,I read it as though the rapist was describing his dirty little occurrences of what happened during the rape.Was this meant to be read through second person perspectives?loved it for the meaning it portrayed but it wouldn't be something that I would even attempt strictly because I'm against rape entirely.I mean I can't even watch a rape scene in a movie without getting really fucking pissed off and from that anger alone makes me stop watching the movie.Your poems are different,not in a bad way,it just means that your more gifted I would say....Thanks so much for the significant experience reading your poetry.
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re: Twisted with meaning...
12th Mar 2012 3:49am
rather odd
22nd Mar 2012 3:53am
doesnt it kind of sound like the rapist is scottish... or is that just what i think?
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re: rather odd
23rd Mar 2012 3:23am
ok
23rd Mar 2012 3:36am
re: ok
23rd Mar 2012 1:15pm
I quite
14th Apr 2012 8:00pm
like... I wasn't expecting to, and now I do I'm not sure why I do! 'What a nice little cunt' hits at just the right time, and the ending climaxes with mature precision. Also, god on you for flipping it round... The 'I'm a sorry victim' section of this site is huge, and its nice to see a daunting take on courageous satire.
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re: I quite
15th Apr 2012 7:11am
Thank you, I prefer my work to be controversial, or from the bad guys shoes. So maybe, just maybe we as human beings can dig into the psyches of purely insane men.