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My resting place
I know I'm lost; no way out;
Their is nothing I'm going to fuss about.
I can only see red as it flows;
I know when you feel me that my room grows.
I move back and forth just like your life;
Inside of this room: I see no strife.
I am bounced around like a little ball;
I am floating so I will never fall.
I can not be pulled from this enclave;
I am forever your begging slave.
To be here as long as you need me;
But soon as you want I will be free.
I know you don't understand now;
You couldn't even comprehend how.
Never to be ripped or torn apart;
For I live inside your heart.
A hopeless romantic:
Their is nothing I'm going to fuss about.
I can only see red as it flows;
I know when you feel me that my room grows.
I move back and forth just like your life;
Inside of this room: I see no strife.
I am bounced around like a little ball;
I am floating so I will never fall.
I can not be pulled from this enclave;
I am forever your begging slave.
To be here as long as you need me;
But soon as you want I will be free.
I know you don't understand now;
You couldn't even comprehend how.
Never to be ripped or torn apart;
For I live inside your heart.
A hopeless romantic:
Published 9th Mar 2012
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9th Mar 2012 7:22pm
For ever ever love this write very short and sweet
But as always youve got us on our feet
Very well done its just i cant help but wonder
To what lucky woman all this romance is splayed
Im sure as it resounded in my chest it will also touch every woman in her breast with warmth and wishes oh let it be
Every great writerpulls the reader in by makeing it sound as though you answered our unasked questions makeing it all abouteach and every eye that is caught to the page your words are whispered in each individuals souls longing ears
All my love you just made me blush i love that about you
Great write
But as always youve got us on our feet
Very well done its just i cant help but wonder
To what lucky woman all this romance is splayed
Im sure as it resounded in my chest it will also touch every woman in her breast with warmth and wishes oh let it be
Every great writerpulls the reader in by makeing it sound as though you answered our unasked questions makeing it all abouteach and every eye that is caught to the page your words are whispered in each individuals souls longing ears
All my love you just made me blush i love that about you
Great write
9th Mar 2012 9:25pm
9th Mar 2012 7:43pm
well diablia363 again said it all- it's really fantastic, such a different look at a fairy tale conception of love!!!!!!!!!!!!!
9th Mar 2012 9:27pm
Seems we write too much about the outside looking in. So I want to change it up and look at it from where it all starts and ends. Thank you for the comment
9th Mar 2012 8:04pm
There is nothing wrong with being a romantic.If there was half the world would be wrong.well done.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
9th Mar 2012 9:28pm
WHICH 1/2 DO YOU FALL INTO? Thank you for your kind words and compliement Red.
11th Mar 2012 12:31pm
Awe your sweet spots rubbing off on me dave :D
Pulling me out of the depths of my own mind
I hope forever you shall be a hopeless romantic
Pulling me out of the depths of my own mind
I hope forever you shall be a hopeless romantic
11th Mar 2012 3:23pm
I have always been like this...just end up with the wrong women! Thank you for your comment Courtney ;)
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