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big girl
secrets folded into lies
little truths I hide
I turn them into superstars
my ugly hurts
to be devoured then forgotten
I am a big girl
my personality the prettiest part of me
weaving secret into wishes
I sigh into my visions of myself
little truths I hide
I turn them into superstars
my ugly hurts
to be devoured then forgotten
I am a big girl
my personality the prettiest part of me
weaving secret into wishes
I sigh into my visions of myself
Published 3rd Feb 2022
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3rd Feb 2022 2:34am
The last line is brutally perfect. It's a sentence every single writer says "damn, I want to steal that line".
If they disagree, they're lying or ignorant of its power. If they even comprehend it, that is.
We are who we are, dear poet. And in secret, no one knows besides ourselves how perfect we really are, as is. We are all complex and unique individuals, that makes us remarkable. Nothing less.
If they disagree, they're lying or ignorant of its power. If they even comprehend it, that is.
We are who we are, dear poet. And in secret, no one knows besides ourselves how perfect we really are, as is. We are all complex and unique individuals, that makes us remarkable. Nothing less.
3rd Feb 2022 3:09am
thank you graciously dearest Styxian you made my night with your beautifully thoughtful critique...it's true we are who we are and beautiful at that...it's not always easy to remember...I'm happy to come across souls such as you in this life 💕
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3rd Feb 2022 3:10am
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3rd Feb 2022 7:09pm
good morning dearest Jay thank you for such a beautifully thoughtful comment you have lovely soul 💕
7th Mar 2022 4:19pm
As Lt.DansLegs (cool name btw) pointed out, beauty goes beyond the visual. It's a matter of confidence and sensuality. After all, the brain is the first organ that is stimulated.
Then again I'm about all them curves and no brakes,
Excellent spill.
Then again I'm about all them curves and no brakes,
Excellent spill.
7th Mar 2022 10:26pm
