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Not Fair....
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Author's Note
Native dialect.. I dedicate this to my grann, 28 year old professional woman and still have to phone to Haiti and ask permission can I cut my hair... As we speak my curls still remain atop my head...ooo
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Re. Not Fair....
comme les mots ici que mon amie a écrits en français pour appeler ta grand-mère pour obtenir le feu sont doux, c'est génial et montre que ton amour pour elle
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Re: Re. Not Fair....
30th Jan 2022 00:59am
Merci beaucoup mon ami d'avoir pris le temps de lire et d'avoir ensuite ajouté un commentaire aussi encourageant.
S'il vous plaît profitez de votre soirée et que vous ayez un dimanche béni à l'horizon proche.
S'il vous plaît profitez de votre soirée et que vous ayez un dimanche béni à l'horizon proche.
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30th Jan 2022 1:55am
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30th Jan 2022 2:09am
Re. Not Fair....
Nice dedication to your grandmother. I wish you could cut your hair or get a different hairstyle. But you would make any hairstyle look great. Keep on writing my Queen.
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Re: Re. Not Fair....
30th Jan 2022 3:24am
Thank you, my handsome poet, for taking the time to read and then commenting on a sensitive matter, the last time if you can remember when I got my hair professionally cut and then advised my grann...in her dialect it was not very encouraging to the ear, and I thanked goodness my hair did somewhat grow back, before, she came to New York for my graduation ceremony last June
Enjoy the remainder of your evening and have a fabulous Sunday...
Enjoy the remainder of your evening and have a fabulous Sunday...
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30th Jan 2022 4:19am
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1st Feb 2022 00:49am
Mm... Je suppose qu'une cheminée devrait être incluse avec cette imagerie mon poète errant et merci d'avoir pris le temps de lire et de commenter
Sur un si doux souhait, profitez de votre soirée et passez un fantastique mardi
Sur un si doux souhait, profitez de votre soirée et passez un fantastique mardi
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