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A Flaming Desire.
Light splashes the ground,
while thick green encircles you.
Hear the trickling sound,
and birds chirping around you.
However, it's all an act,
bedecked in ribbons, pretty lies.
Open your ignorant eyes,
take a peek at the truth inside.
The streams were merely kerosene,
birds chirping were lighter flicks.
Now your beloved green
is up in flames, degraded sticks.
That's the brutal reality,
a sweet crackling fire.
That's the expensive price, my love,
for your overwhelming desire.
while thick green encircles you.
Hear the trickling sound,
and birds chirping around you.
However, it's all an act,
bedecked in ribbons, pretty lies.
Open your ignorant eyes,
take a peek at the truth inside.
The streams were merely kerosene,
birds chirping were lighter flicks.
Now your beloved green
is up in flames, degraded sticks.
That's the brutal reality,
a sweet crackling fire.
That's the expensive price, my love,
for your overwhelming desire.
Published 9th Mar 2012
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9th Mar 2012 11:17am
it appears suspicious for you to love everything i do, you know. people are gonna think i've drugged you, or put you under a spell. Still, thank you dearest..
9th Mar 2012 4:26pm
9th Mar 2012 7:31pm
This is the most profound piece I have read from you. It is amazing and I love it! Pulling the covers off of the "Disney" facade of love and desire to show it in its pure form, fire, pain and rage! Your flow and imagery, wordplay, vocab...I can't say enough, well well well done! x x
9th Mar 2012 11:28pm
I am quite honored to have impressed you so.(: My flow was a little jacked, but I am digging this support! XD Thank you, thank you.. one hundred times thank you.(:
