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The Shower Of Love
When the bridge of passion greets the softness of desire and hearing my name echoed
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Author's Note
Mmm... dedicated when my name smoothly rolls off his tongue.... wink
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Re. The Shower Of Love
25th Jan 2022 5:56am
WOW my friend whata sweet sweet vedio you layed upon thy canvas just BEATUIFUL would you join me in this shower of love
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Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 3:41am
Thank you, my friend, for taking the required time to listen and then adding such a heartfelt compliment, thank you, truly
Please take the time to enjoy this late evening and have a wonderful Wednesday
Please take the time to enjoy this late evening and have a wonderful Wednesday
Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 5:09am
Re. The Shower Of Love
25th Jan 2022 6:13am
The visual comes across like an audio-visual love letter. As a man I would quite warm to a woman sending her wishes to me while pictured in a shower.
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Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 3:54am
I always blush when reading your comment my wise poet, and this time is no exception... subsequently, I like how you gathered the image to fit the monotone of the video in general
In addition, thank you for listening, in as much appreciated...
I will be bidding you a good morning in the UK and be safe as the day slowly unfolds.
In addition, thank you for listening, in as much appreciated...
I will be bidding you a good morning in the UK and be safe as the day slowly unfolds.
Re. The Shower Of Love
25th Jan 2022 11:14am
Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 4:14am
If I have not told you Happy New Year, then please accept that sentiment in earnest, my poetess...
I must bow in respect to another gifted poetess who spills such beautiful musings on her canvas and has still taken the time to scribble on mine, thank you.
Enjoy your Tuesday evening and have a fabulous Wednesday my poetess
I must bow in respect to another gifted poetess who spills such beautiful musings on her canvas and has still taken the time to scribble on mine, thank you.
Enjoy your Tuesday evening and have a fabulous Wednesday my poetess
Re. The Shower Of Love
25th Jan 2022 6:33pm
Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 4:03am
Your engaging words always seem to go right along with the musing at hand my handsome poet.. I like that...
Thank you, most certainly for the sweet comment, its appreciated and taken to merit...
The day is waning, therefore, please enjoy it to the fullest and have a spectacular Wednesday in all you do and in all you say
Thank you, most certainly for the sweet comment, its appreciated and taken to merit...
The day is waning, therefore, please enjoy it to the fullest and have a spectacular Wednesday in all you do and in all you say
Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 6:31pm
I'll enjoy my Wednesday. You also enjoy your Wednesday and stay safe put there.
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Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 2:27am
I wanted to like this, I enjoyed the idea behind it very much. The echo as you read was distracting.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 3:10am
It would have been much easier had the narrative been posted as you read along, however, I declined in the end... which I am sure, not so much distracting, Moreso... you had to be more attuned to what I was saying...
Thank you, my poetess, for taking the time to listen and then commenting
On that note, I am biding you a relaxing evening and a safe and encouraging Wednesday...
Thank you, my poetess, for taking the time to listen and then commenting
On that note, I am biding you a relaxing evening and a safe and encouraging Wednesday...
Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 11:30am
Re: Re. The Shower Of Love
26th Jan 2022 11:25pm
This makes me appreciate the sense of sound, when an oral serenade captures the essence of the heart when intended for the ears of the beholder
Thank you, my tender poet, for listening to such a whisper among the stars
I am wishing you nothing, but warm nights and sweet dreams have a blessed evening and a productive Thursday
Thank you, my tender poet, for listening to such a whisper among the stars
I am wishing you nothing, but warm nights and sweet dreams have a blessed evening and a productive Thursday