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South by Dead South
I feel it now
It slithers around inside
Smokey cloud
Blocking
All neural netways
I am soaring
In my new found state
Ten floors up
I don't feel the cold
I see the geese
Heading south for the heat
I too can fly
Wait for me little birdies
As I spread my arms
And I too head south
Ten floors down
It slithers around inside
Smokey cloud
Blocking
All neural netways
I am soaring
In my new found state
Ten floors up
I don't feel the cold
I see the geese
Heading south for the heat
I too can fly
Wait for me little birdies
As I spread my arms
And I too head south
Ten floors down
Published 22nd Jan 2022
Author's Note
My only drug now is caffeine, used to be alcohol, not any more thankfully.
Dabbled in some wacky backy earlier in life, that was fun🤔
Dabbled in some wacky backy earlier in life, that was fun🤔
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22nd Jan 2022 11:08pm
Oohhh. Killer ending!! No pun intended.
It has a smidge of suicidal innuendo.
Well said with all of the phrasing and pacing.
Spreading your wings Whyme.
It has a smidge of suicidal innuendo.
Well said with all of the phrasing and pacing.
Spreading your wings Whyme.
22nd Jan 2022 11:16pm
Thanks A
Yea, touch suicidal, been there, but not like that,
Just wrote this now only, not sure wheee it came from, but it flowed easy to me so down it went.
I've always liked the dark side of life though.
Always been opened minded about stuff.
And on here I can let it snow, let it snow 😁😁😁.
Think I'll clip my wings a wee bit,
Thanks for the pleasure of your company on here A
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏
Yea, touch suicidal, been there, but not like that,
Just wrote this now only, not sure wheee it came from, but it flowed easy to me so down it went.
I've always liked the dark side of life though.
Always been opened minded about stuff.
And on here I can let it snow, let it snow 😁😁😁.
Think I'll clip my wings a wee bit,
Thanks for the pleasure of your company on here A
Love n peace
💜💜💜💜🙏
