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Haunted Prayer
my shared presence
without pretense
for the living and dead
Intertwined never buried
feel my cold silk
robe of words
gliding across
your awakened skin
resurrecting each
hushed syllable
flowing forth with
each whispered step
toward a plummeting
candle lit hallway
made of memories
reaching for me
In the sway of the flame
and I feel the moment
of surrender
of poetry
of my haunted prayer
without pretense
for the living and dead
Intertwined never buried
feel my cold silk
robe of words
gliding across
your awakened skin
resurrecting each
hushed syllable
flowing forth with
each whispered step
toward a plummeting
candle lit hallway
made of memories
reaching for me
In the sway of the flame
and I feel the moment
of surrender
of poetry
of my haunted prayer
Published 19th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Some of our stuff is so personal at times it feels like a prayer.
At least to me.
FYI
Listening to while writing
MISSIO - Bottom of the deep blue sea (acoustic version and radio version)
At least to me.
FYI
Listening to while writing
MISSIO - Bottom of the deep blue sea (acoustic version and radio version)
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
19th Jan 2022 2:19am
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19th Jan 2022 2:29am
Hey:)
Thank you for the snaps buddy. Love this song.
The mind is awesome to take a dive into. You can think you have it all figured out and nope. You end up doing a U-turn or changing direction.
Always fun to see where you will end up.
Thanks for the RL Relic!!!
Woop Woop
Thank you for the snaps buddy. Love this song.
The mind is awesome to take a dive into. You can think you have it all figured out and nope. You end up doing a U-turn or changing direction.
Always fun to see where you will end up.
Thanks for the RL Relic!!!
Woop Woop
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
19th Jan 2022 2:32am
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19th Jan 2022 2:40am
19th Jan 2022 2:46am
Hey Ron!!
So nice to see ya left a comment.
Thank you. Trying something different.
Was kinda an out of body experience when writing.
Disappeared for a moment:)
So nice to see ya left a comment.
Thank you. Trying something different.
Was kinda an out of body experience when writing.
Disappeared for a moment:)
19th Jan 2022 8:04am
Hiya A
Sometimes when I think I have enough words gathered upstairs to write a poem.
It's something completely different that gets written down,
It goes to a place I hadn't even thought of.
Your poem feels like I was wrapped up in the milky way and taken on a dreamscape journey.
Love n peace A
💜💜💜💜
Sometimes when I think I have enough words gathered upstairs to write a poem.
It's something completely different that gets written down,
It goes to a place I hadn't even thought of.
Your poem feels like I was wrapped up in the milky way and taken on a dreamscape journey.
Love n peace A
💜💜💜💜
20th Jan 2022 00:24am
Hey Whyme:)
So glad I wrapped you up amigo. heheh
Dreamscape journey. What an amazing comment.
Thank you so much.
I kinda love the fact of that each write is spontaneous emotion
captured with ink. Just need to buckle up and enjoy the ride.
You are awesome!!
So glad I wrapped you up amigo. heheh
Dreamscape journey. What an amazing comment.
Thank you so much.
I kinda love the fact of that each write is spontaneous emotion
captured with ink. Just need to buckle up and enjoy the ride.
You are awesome!!
20th Jan 2022 3:48am
19th Jan 2022 8:59am
A haunting energy that really comes alive,
bringing together dissolved dualities in the endless hemisphere of poetry.
Most sacred.
Like a veil of ghosts that whispers into
the void between what is proposed to be life and death, coming alive, speaking...
The passion of your art inspires me greatly.
bringing together dissolved dualities in the endless hemisphere of poetry.
Most sacred.
Like a veil of ghosts that whispers into
the void between what is proposed to be life and death, coming alive, speaking...
The passion of your art inspires me greatly.
20th Jan 2022 00:50am
Hey Cipher
This is one of the best comments I've ever received from you.
Thank you so much.
I feel our spirits are so much stronger than our physical selves.
I love the reference of the veil. You make me think about it in the sense of the wedding veil being lifted. Divorcing life and marrying death as a continuation of life.
So happy my work inspires you.
Right back at ya:)
Thanks for the RL
This is one of the best comments I've ever received from you.
Thank you so much.
I feel our spirits are so much stronger than our physical selves.
I love the reference of the veil. You make me think about it in the sense of the wedding veil being lifted. Divorcing life and marrying death as a continuation of life.
So happy my work inspires you.
Right back at ya:)
Thanks for the RL
19th Jan 2022 10:23pm
20th Jan 2022 00:55am
Yeah, remind me to never talk a big game about
leaving the site. Turns out I'm a big wimp. LOL
Thanks for the RL and BIG LIKE amigo:)
leaving the site. Turns out I'm a big wimp. LOL
Thanks for the RL and BIG LIKE amigo:)
20th Jan 2022 00:14am
20th Jan 2022 1:00am
Hi!
So happy it enticed you:)
I love the fact that our poems will still be around
after we are gone. Leaving some sort of essence for
our loved ones to read.
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving a comment:)
So happy it enticed you:)
I love the fact that our poems will still be around
after we are gone. Leaving some sort of essence for
our loved ones to read.
Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving a comment:)
20th Jan 2022 00:18am
This fantastic… I love every stanza… filled with poetic gold… one of your best that I have read…
20th Jan 2022 1:02am
Thank you LilD!
I'm so happy you enjoyed.
Now you know how I feel when I read
your stuff:)
thanks for the RL amiga:)
I'm so happy you enjoyed.
Now you know how I feel when I read
your stuff:)
thanks for the RL amiga:)
26th Jan 2022 00:42am
26th Jan 2022 00:47am
Hi:)
Thank you so much. I totally dig all of your stuff so for me
this is truly a heartfelt comment.
Thanks for the RL as well amigo.
Thank you so much. I totally dig all of your stuff so for me
this is truly a heartfelt comment.
Thanks for the RL as well amigo.
Anonymous
28th Mar 2022 11:55pm
beautiful, truthful work
29th Mar 2022 2:21am
Hi:)
Thank you. It was one of those poems that just popped into my
head when I was asleep. Woke up - turned on my music and off
I went.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting!
Thank you. It was one of those poems that just popped into my
head when I was asleep. Woke up - turned on my music and off
I went.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting!
