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where you bit me
I reach back and touch my shoulder blades
when my fingers reach the two spots
where you bit me
hunched over me like an animal
continuing to thrust into me
my hands cuffed on my back
I can still feel the pain
images of our fierce, violent love flash by
a sensation of your smell fills my head
I smile, put my hands back on the keyboard and continue to work
and hope you'll never let me leave your place without leaving a trace of your pleasure on my body.
when my fingers reach the two spots
where you bit me
hunched over me like an animal
continuing to thrust into me
my hands cuffed on my back
I can still feel the pain
images of our fierce, violent love flash by
a sensation of your smell fills my head
I smile, put my hands back on the keyboard and continue to work
and hope you'll never let me leave your place without leaving a trace of your pleasure on my body.
Published 11th Jan 2022
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11th Jan 2022 11:54pm
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12th Jan 2022 9:15pm
13th Apr 2022 1:30pm
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
I love this a lot. Goes for your language too. Human, honest and very sincere! Very nice indeed!
I’ll be on the look out for next work of yours.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
I love this a lot. Goes for your language too. Human, honest and very sincere! Very nice indeed!
I’ll be on the look out for next work of yours.
Kind regards, Gus
15th Apr 2022 8:05pm
20th Apr 2022 1:53pm
No news from the low lands.
I only stopped by to see if I like it as much as I thought I did.
And yes, it’s true.
Liking it two times? Seems to be forbidden here at DUP.
Which is strange.
JimCroce (good lyrics) said:
If you like it, do it
If you like it a lot? Do it twice.
Looks like no way I can win them over. But trust me. I’d do it twice.
Kind regards.Gus
I only stopped by to see if I like it as much as I thought I did.
And yes, it’s true.
Liking it two times? Seems to be forbidden here at DUP.
Which is strange.
JimCroce (good lyrics) said:
If you like it, do it
If you like it a lot? Do it twice.
Looks like no way I can win them over. But trust me. I’d do it twice.
Kind regards.Gus
21st Apr 2022 4:05pm
27th Apr 2022 6:13am
"I smile.....and hope you'll never let me leave your place without leaving a trace of your pleasure on my body." To which I'm sure a man would grant gladly grant the wish.
27th Apr 2022 8:20pm
10th Oct 2022 10:47pm
Your poem captures the emotion and feeling that a spot of pain brings back the memory of the carnal pleasure.
You enjoy being marked as his.
You enjoy being marked as his.
23rd Jan 2023 10:09am
