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Senryu: Fleeting Comfort
Roll over searching
that bit of cold mattress
simple tingles found
that bit of cold mattress
simple tingles found
Published 7th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Anyone else love finding that cool spot on the pillow or mattress or am I just a little off? 😁
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7th Jan 2022 10:57pm
😂 😂 and flipping the pillow over, too!!! Ahhhh... ❄That's the best! As a woman of a certain age, prone to night sweats and hot flashes at ungodly hours... This resonates in a way, you can barely comprehend!!
*I am jumping up and down like I've just scored a super bowl touchdown* kind of appreciative of this witty and spot on senryú!!
Outstanding work, BB!
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*I am jumping up and down like I've just scored a super bowl touchdown* kind of appreciative of this witty and spot on senryú!!
Outstanding work, BB!
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7th Jan 2022 11:08pm
Wow, ady Blue
I am thrilled that this resonates with you...and the night sweats? Kind of a rurn on not gonna lie 🐻💞🐰
I am thrilled that this resonates with you...and the night sweats? Kind of a rurn on not gonna lie 🐻💞🐰
7th Jan 2022 11:18pm
7th Jan 2022 11:22pm
Hi, Oralizer...nice to know that simple pleasure is shared. Thank you for reading and commenting.
8th Jan 2022 10:54am
Dear GW,
This is a tie only with finding money in a pair of pants you haven’t worn in a while. Otherwise, this is a delightful poem of pure joy. As a matter of fact, I’m turning my pillow now…aaahhh. Perfect. H🌷
This is a tie only with finding money in a pair of pants you haven’t worn in a while. Otherwise, this is a delightful poem of pure joy. As a matter of fact, I’m turning my pillow now…aaahhh. Perfect. H🌷
