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stunted roots & walkin' boots
With a devastating
sway of hips
she broke all the rules
beautiful beneath
apocalyptic skies
her hair was
the color of october
autumn leaves fallen
quiet rain clouds slumbered
in the gray of her eyes
if this were a love poem
I'd tell you
that the faeries
graced her cheeks
with kisses...
but her boots were
much too comfortable for that
sway of hips
she broke all the rules
beautiful beneath
apocalyptic skies
her hair was
the color of october
autumn leaves fallen
quiet rain clouds slumbered
in the gray of her eyes
if this were a love poem
I'd tell you
that the faeries
graced her cheeks
with kisses...
but her boots were
much too comfortable for that
Author's Note
Nude study painting by Mara Light
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Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
3rd Jan 2022 2:12am
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12th Jan 2022 11:43pm
Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
3rd Jan 2022 2:22am
Her hair was the color of october leaves fallen.............superb image. Regards, Robert.
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12th Jan 2022 11:46pm
Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
3rd Jan 2022 3:34am
This is wonderful. The ending is closure for the title, and left me kinda melancholy.
You have great imagery working within this. It's good stuff.
You have great imagery working within this. It's good stuff.
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Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
3rd Jan 2022 3:38am
PS, the picture...
I'm wondering if that's a scar, below and to the left of her belly button. If so, it's a poetic choice for your poem. The wounds we acquire, then the healing.
I'm wondering if that's a scar, below and to the left of her belly button. If so, it's a poetic choice for your poem. The wounds we acquire, then the healing.
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Re: Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
12th Jan 2022 11:50pm
She was a perfect fit for this one, melancholy tones to match, and that scar..... good eye.
I appreciate the visit and thanks so much for leaving some words
I appreciate the visit and thanks so much for leaving some words
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12th Jan 2022 11:52pm
Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
3rd Jan 2022 1:52pm
Lovely poem that affirms the poet is smitten.
The kissing of the boots a submissive gesture of hope at a relationship, or that you would do anything for her.
The kissing of the boots a submissive gesture of hope at a relationship, or that you would do anything for her.
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Re: Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
13th Jan 2022 00:38am
The things we do for love...
But a girl needs a good pair of boots
Thank you for wandering through my words and kindly leaving a few
But a girl needs a good pair of boots
Thank you for wandering through my words and kindly leaving a few
Re. stunted roots & walkin' boots
3rd Jan 2022 5:34pm
Your structure carries a perfect tone throughout and draws us in but not too close nor too far... quite lovely Kas
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13th Jan 2022 00:44am
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13th Jan 2022 00:47am
A most lovely compliment, his work forever gracing our hearts as well as the page.
Thank you for remembering and for the beautiful comment
Thank you for remembering and for the beautiful comment
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