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So you are tired of me already
A man you found so brilliant
You appreciated so much
Yes, such maturity,
You appreciated my
Constructive comments and critiques
In regards to your poetry
And the way items rhymed
From lines one to six.
I will not question the who
The when or the why
I do not want to hear more excuses
Insults and cries.
Love, admiration,
Such lofty sentiments appear and grow.
Then
Sudden breaks, shocks and surprises
But in the end
Nothing new under the sun
As all things eventually  wither
And die.
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