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Dont live life with regret
To me this life isn’t about how you feel right now
Its all about how you think about near the end.
Will you be happy? Or will you think of people that you still wish to befriend?
When you think back to the early days, will you want to re-live the weekend?
Or will you wish to stop the nightmare, and to put the pain to an end?
Because what goes around, comes around
So if you choose to make others lives a hell, you surely are hell bound yourself
So just be happy with life, and take what you can get
Don’t care what others think, and don’t live life regret.
This was my first poem I have ever written, please tell me what you think/tell me what i should work on.
Its all about how you think about near the end.
Will you be happy? Or will you think of people that you still wish to befriend?
When you think back to the early days, will you want to re-live the weekend?
Or will you wish to stop the nightmare, and to put the pain to an end?
Because what goes around, comes around
So if you choose to make others lives a hell, you surely are hell bound yourself
So just be happy with life, and take what you can get
Don’t care what others think, and don’t live life regret.
This was my first poem I have ever written, please tell me what you think/tell me what i should work on.
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