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Haiku/Senryu, Nr.04 — Week-End
Bottle of wine lasts
two days however I drink
red but she drinks white.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 14th Dec 2021
| Edited 21st Oct 2023
Author's Note
Haiku/Senryu, Nr.03 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/390787-anomaly/
Haiku/Senryu, Nr.05 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/439845-poets-blood/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/390787-anomaly/
Haiku/Senryu, Nr.05 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/439845-poets-blood/
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Re. Week-End (senryu)
14th Dec 2021 11:39pm
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26th Dec 2021 10:08pm
"Everything is differently the same, like the rising sun and the falling rain" -- commonality beats difference. Thanks for the comment, Robert. Happy Christmas, Josh.
Re. Week-End (senryu)
16th Dec 2021 6:36am
Dear J,
And together you both shall be content and a bit tipsy. I loved the twist and playful notion of this poem. H🌷
And together you both shall be content and a bit tipsy. I loved the twist and playful notion of this poem. H🌷
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Re: Re. Week-End (senryu)
26th Dec 2021 10:11pm
Thank you H -- and for the RL.
She's content ... see bottom of mage 36 on:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11128/525/
She's content ... see bottom of mage 36 on:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11128/525/
Re: Re. Week-End (senryu)
27th Dec 2021 3:18am
Wow! Those hangars are amazing! And harvesting olives…you’re living the dream. Beautiful!
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Re. Week-End (senryu)
29th Dec 2021 8:28am
It begs the question about the conversation you two have when taste buds may differ.
Nice spill sir
Nice spill sir
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Re: Re. Week-End (senryu)
30th Dec 2021 7:14pm
Conversation tends to revolve around creative projects and which ones to do first where the other's help is needed. Fortunately we agree most of the time. Meanwhile the annual New Year detox, no alcohol/coffee/etc, is fast approaching ... 😀
All the best for 2022,
Josh.
All the best for 2022,
Josh.
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.04 — Week-End
Anonymous
10th Dec 2022 9:24pm
So nice and lovingly complimentary
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11th Dec 2022 4:17pm