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blue
your smile cracked when you look at me
I was always a mystery to your blue
I veiled my hurt with laughter
I understood your river
I needed you to submerge in mine
I am deep metaphors at midnight
you are quiet as a grave
the dead tell no tales
you held your secrets close to you
you would never let me know you
you invite me closer
then quietly close the door
I was your blueness
your broken heart you carried with you
you could look but not touch my honesty
my cracked smile made you weep inside
you never told me...
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 10th Dec 2021
| Edited 11th Dec 2021
Author's Note
you ever had a person you loved you never really opened up to
you felt something between you but you never talked about it?
you felt something between you but you never talked about it?
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10th Dec 2021 6:38pm
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10th Dec 2021 6:41pm
hello dearest Ron I think it's the love that sometime haunts what could have been thank you for reading and sharing❤
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10th Dec 2021 8:36pm
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10th Dec 2021 8:56pm
good afternoon dearest Tim it's true they don't I think all of us have souls like this we've encountered special to our hearts and we dare not break the magic with words thank you my friend for the love here❤
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Anonymous
10th Dec 2021 8:55pm
Love it!
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10th Dec 2021 11:22pm
Re. blue
10th Dec 2021 9:24pm
Crim,
This is the one that lingers in thoughts, that ache that you can't name and on more nights than they should, haunt dreams.
--B
This is the one that lingers in thoughts, that ache that you can't name and on more nights than they should, haunt dreams.
--B
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Re: Re. blue
10th Dec 2021 11:23pm
thank you beautiful Bonzi for such a deeply poetic thought yes that's it exactly❤
Anonymous
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10th Dec 2021 11:57pm
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11th Dec 2021 00:04am
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11th Dec 2021 10:03am
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12th Dec 2021 2:13am
thank you graciously dearest Cipher like words never said... I deeply appreciate you thoughts here❤
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Anonymous
12th Dec 2021 1:36am
Hey Crim…….this hurt me to read…….I know how much this hurts inside……even though they only see your smile…….when you try to speak of things in your soul…..they run away…….I hope your heart & soul heal…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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12th Dec 2021 2:16am
good evening beautiful Flower you interpretation of this poem is deep... don't feel bad dear lady this is part truth part fiction...most of my poems are...I was just thinking on loves that words went unspoken... I cherish you lovely one❤
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17th Dec 2021 4:04pm
Loved how you open and closed with cracked smiles, the unspoken connection that persists and yet we don't know what to do with it.
And for your author notes, absolutely. Decorum sometimes prevents us from crossing lines, so we walk away with lingering thoughts.
Well done.
And for your author notes, absolutely. Decorum sometimes prevents us from crossing lines, so we walk away with lingering thoughts.
Well done.
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17th Dec 2021 5:25pm
good morning dearest Wally yes that's it exactly decorum it dictates we take certain actions given a situation...it's just that not talked about connection that hurts...thank you for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment❤