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overheard overhearin
"........o'my dear my dear, i never really meant the stupid
things you said even as i thought i was saying so &
saying so so as to not mean what was said as-if as-if as
if It
was an auditory hallu
cination like some blowed ram's horn bringin'down walls,
w'alls & things akin to pulling a donkey jawbone outta me
ass to smite a mule or somesuch idiocy....... i
know
you under
stand under
esteem'ated y'll never be......."
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>>>Just Sitting
Just sitting means just that. That 'just' endlessly goes against the grain of our need to fix, transform, and improve ourselves. The paradox of our practice is that the most effective way of transformation is to leave ourselves alone. The more we let everything be just what it is, the more we relax into an open, attentive awareness of one moment after another.-------- Barry Magid, "Leave Yourself Alone"
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by Dan Kozak on Monday, March 5, 2012 at 12:05pm ·
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things you said even as i thought i was saying so &
saying so so as to not mean what was said as-if as-if as
if It
was an auditory hallu
cination like some blowed ram's horn bringin'down walls,
w'alls & things akin to pulling a donkey jawbone outta me
ass to smite a mule or somesuch idiocy....... i
know
you under
stand under
esteem'ated y'll never be......."
________dkzk24fbry2012________
>>>Just Sitting
Just sitting means just that. That 'just' endlessly goes against the grain of our need to fix, transform, and improve ourselves. The paradox of our practice is that the most effective way of transformation is to leave ourselves alone. The more we let everything be just what it is, the more we relax into an open, attentive awareness of one moment after another.-------- Barry Magid, "Leave Yourself Alone"
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by Dan Kozak on Monday, March 5, 2012 at 12:05pm ·
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* St. John Coltrane African Orthodox Church
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* Street Saxophonist
* Coleman Hawkins Neighborhood Festival
* Family
* Our Lady of Czestochowa University of Bklyn
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Published 5th Mar 2012
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Haven't I overheard you saying this one B4, or am I auditory hallucinating myself? Man, DK, is this a rewrite? Well I can't find an original so I'll have to say that I understand only maybe. Ha, ha. Nice one. Sorry here I am modifying my posts again. This might be a problem I have here.
i had it in my FB drafts dept. i thought i'd posted it too but eye get confused easy. if i did post it b4, it wasn't 'changed'...maybe the extraneous decoration that came along wit the cut'n'paste transfer?
i told ye...i don't know whether i'm comingoing----------okay, yeah, you did read it b4 wit slightly dif title....it shouldn't been in my 'drafts' if i'd already puked it out on th'hole wide world....
so not a rewrite...just a product of my disconsciousness.
thee title is 'better' on the earlier...thee foto is 'much better' on most recent...the text is probably same= sillybrain junk....haha
i told ye...i don't know whether i'm comingoing----------okay, yeah, you did read it b4 wit slightly dif title....it shouldn't been in my 'drafts' if i'd already puked it out on th'hole wide world....
so not a rewrite...just a product of my disconsciousness.
thee title is 'better' on the earlier...thee foto is 'much better' on most recent...the text is probably same= sillybrain junk....haha
6th Mar 2012 12:15pm
O.K. I thought you wre rewriting a poem and maybe changing just one word to chide me since we just had discussion about rewriting or not. It is still a good piece with the "didn't mean what you said" and the ass jawbone.
6th Mar 2012 3:41pm
thank ye for affirming my precious cleverity in them little parts'n'pieces.
ain't no'body else seems t'wanna notice....very grateful to have the notice of one
who's work eye can notice'ably also appreciate.
grazie, little br'other
ain't no'body else seems t'wanna notice....very grateful to have the notice of one
who's work eye can notice'ably also appreciate.
grazie, little br'other
