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Unripe Modesty
I looked up "sweet, unripe girl". This is what
I found...my fingers explored ideas there:
A cock to trace, with my tips, member: hot
And hard and ready for my handy care;
I had thought that I might, gently, indulge
A thick shaft with my lips; but, then, you chose
To turn it all around and to divulge
Your taste for my fresh juice before you rose;
You plucked me harder, hoping to ignite
The passion in this soft fruit you had found;
Intention: you would plunder and requite
Your needy, male hardness; oh! The sound!
My cries (excited) grew, bringing defeat
To unripe modesty: it was so sweet.
I found...my fingers explored ideas there:
A cock to trace, with my tips, member: hot
And hard and ready for my handy care;
I had thought that I might, gently, indulge
A thick shaft with my lips; but, then, you chose
To turn it all around and to divulge
Your taste for my fresh juice before you rose;
You plucked me harder, hoping to ignite
The passion in this soft fruit you had found;
Intention: you would plunder and requite
Your needy, male hardness; oh! The sound!
My cries (excited) grew, bringing defeat
To unripe modesty: it was so sweet.
Author's Note
I've given up protecting poems in pictures - they still get stolen - once you put it out there I guess it is open to the shameless to steal - ah well! I like to share - so that is some consolation. If you steal then I hope you die a painful death - smiles sweetly and bites lip naively.
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Re. Unripe Modesty
4th Dec 2021 2:19pm
Awesome, sexy and hot. Loved it. I had a few if my pieces stolen fortunately another poet spotted it and I confronted the thief. I haven't seen them on here since unless they changed names or blocked me
Anyway enough gloom. Great piece Awesome read
Love and light
Ron xxx
Anyway enough gloom. Great piece Awesome read
Love and light
Ron xxx
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4th Dec 2021 4:00pm
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4th Dec 2021 2:42pm
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4th Dec 2021 3:58pm
A tart with a heart ♥
Who will sit on your large part
To get it to start?
Giggles ☺
Who will sit on your large part
To get it to start?
Giggles ☺
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4th Dec 2021 4:53pm
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5th Dec 2021 1:39am
No little blue pills needed
You could make a dead man hard, fortunately my pole is still breathing.....
You could make a dead man hard, fortunately my pole is still breathing.....
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5th Dec 2021 10:15am
Re. Unripe Modesty
4th Dec 2021 5:03pm
I adore you, anyway I can get it.... 🤭
100% agree with your previous sentiment to Ron, it's the honour of sharing in the reading and basking within your uniquely tasty 'tart', that's the an ultimate reward.... in my opinion.
🌹 - 😋
x
100% agree with your previous sentiment to Ron, it's the honour of sharing in the reading and basking within your uniquely tasty 'tart', that's the an ultimate reward.... in my opinion.
🌹 - 😋
x
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12th Dec 2021 8:14pm
glad you enjoyed - not sure where the title came from but it's been vegetating for an age waiting for an airing