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A Lazy Day of
A Lazy Day of
A lazy day
of leaning round
and doing
nothing solid
is just what seems
in order to
unblock what seems
so clotted.
When the mind
begins
to feel that
overwhelming need,
it's usually
that itch to scratch,
that rumbling
to feed.
And like a bear
that finds a tree
and leans and bends
on bark,
there's almost always
honey there
around
in any park.
So take a walk
and smell the air
for sweetness
in the trees,
and find a source
of honey near,
a tree that swarms
with bees.
A lazy day
of leaning round
and doing
nothing solid
is just what seems
in order to
unblock what seems
so clotted.
When the mind
begins
to feel that
overwhelming need,
it's usually
that itch to scratch,
that rumbling
to feed.
And like a bear
that finds a tree
and leans and bends
on bark,
there's almost always
honey there
around
in any park.
So take a walk
and smell the air
for sweetness
in the trees,
and find a source
of honey near,
a tree that swarms
with bees.
Published 27th Nov 2021
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27th Nov 2021 2:10pm
27th Nov 2021 6:27pm
28th Nov 2021 4:07pm
Hi there, RT :)
I really enjoyed your smooth, fluid phrasing from stanza to stanza that carried my reading effortlessly along. This was an uplifting and cleverly metaphoric write with the potential for multiple meanings. (if themes weren't applied) Not only could one see a reminder to take a break and appreciation the natural world around them but after reading the chosen themes; also seeing an opportunity to relish within the deep sensuality of a lover, finding how delicious a day can really be!
(are my musings!)
Thanks for giving me some lovely, erotic and imaginative imagery to bask within today.
🌹 - B
I really enjoyed your smooth, fluid phrasing from stanza to stanza that carried my reading effortlessly along. This was an uplifting and cleverly metaphoric write with the potential for multiple meanings. (if themes weren't applied) Not only could one see a reminder to take a break and appreciation the natural world around them but after reading the chosen themes; also seeing an opportunity to relish within the deep sensuality of a lover, finding how delicious a day can really be!
(are my musings!)
Thanks for giving me some lovely, erotic and imaginative imagery to bask within today.
🌹 - B
28th Nov 2021 5:38pm
