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Better Days
I breathe the air
It feels like home
The sky so high above
As I stand here all alone
I'm always drawn
To nature
Each day her mysteries
enfold as liquid gold
I get pleasure
From the little things
I can hardly wait to see
What joy tomorrow brings
It feels like home
The sky so high above
As I stand here all alone
I'm always drawn
To nature
Each day her mysteries
enfold as liquid gold
I get pleasure
From the little things
I can hardly wait to see
What joy tomorrow brings
Published 26th Nov 2021
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26th Nov 2021 12:41pm
Dear FM,
Love it. Nature as the balm, inspiration, guiding hand…to keep us going another day, it’s glorious. This poem is such a lovely reflection of that glory. Beautiful piece. H🌷
Love it. Nature as the balm, inspiration, guiding hand…to keep us going another day, it’s glorious. This poem is such a lovely reflection of that glory. Beautiful piece. H🌷
27th Nov 2021 9:22pm
Dear H,
Thank you for your wonderful remarks! I always welcome your feedback as it means a lot to me.
Thank you for your wonderful remarks! I always welcome your feedback as it means a lot to me.
26th Nov 2021 1:08pm
27th Nov 2021 9:23pm
26th Nov 2021 2:48pm
A beautiful tribute to remember that no matter what you will go through better days are ahead very spiritual and thoughtful encouragement 🙏👊👊👊
27th Nov 2021 9:26pm
Hi there! I appreciate your comments so much. My spirituality is all tied up in nature. That is why it feels like home. So very good to hear from you!
27th Nov 2021 10:59pm
27th Nov 2021 11:17am
This was an early morning encouragement to me. Thank you for the beautiful thoughts captured in your poem.
Thank you for reading and responding to my poem. I am really glad you enjoyed it.
28th Nov 2021 1:56am
28th Nov 2021 8:34am
