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untitled
playful kisses tingle
soft caresses linger
teasing
staring deep
within me, seeking
places never been
by others
your whispered words
penetrate
my dress falls to floor
you like my lace
underneath
command me
with ease we fall
into song
flesh enmeshed
I rise and I fall
express yearning
with breaths
I pulse, I persuade
you
please
I beg you
continue this pleasure
with expert direction
ignite me
and in
this sanctuary
this moment,
this space
in this sliver
of time that
extends past
forever
where
everything
stops
in this
here
in this
now
we peak
melt
into sheets
together.
soft caresses linger
teasing
staring deep
within me, seeking
places never been
by others
your whispered words
penetrate
my dress falls to floor
you like my lace
underneath
command me
with ease we fall
into song
flesh enmeshed
I rise and I fall
express yearning
with breaths
I pulse, I persuade
you
please
I beg you
continue this pleasure
with expert direction
ignite me
and in
this sanctuary
this moment,
this space
in this sliver
of time that
extends past
forever
where
everything
stops
in this
here
in this
now
we peak
melt
into sheets
together.
Published 25th Nov 2021
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25th Nov 2021 5:55pm
Absolutely awesome write, sensual, erotic, great job
Lovely read
Love and light
Ron xx
Lovely read
Love and light
Ron xx
26th Nov 2021 00:14am
thank you, Ron. Always nice to see you stopping by. Hope that you have been keeping well.
kindly,
ursa 💜
kindly,
ursa 💜
26th Nov 2021 00:17am
I'm fine thank you. Hope alls good with you loved your piece, super sexy
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
26th Nov 2021 3:05am
Dear U,
I need a cigarette after this one. Sizzle and some sexy razzmatazz sister! Well done. H🌷
I need a cigarette after this one. Sizzle and some sexy razzmatazz sister! Well done. H🌷
26th Nov 2021 3:44pm
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26th Nov 2021 3:46pm
9th Dec 2021 8:41pm
Whewww, Ursa!!! 😳
Sheer luring loveliness … I've read a good portion of your excellent writings by now, and I must say your style is delightfully charming, captivating, easy to understand. And, quite habit-forming, to say the least.
You have a certain easy-going directness and wonderfully enjoyable technique to your writing, yet you word-paint vivid visuals into a smooth, energizing timbre in creating your luscious poetic moments … your expressions are a breath of fresh (albeit warm) air, almost a whisper in extremely enticing and satisfying poetic voice.
I see you have this one posted as "untitled," but you should consider "stimulation," because it easily does that to one's amorous senses.
I think you're a most wonderful writer, Ursa, whose work deserves to be published between its own covers.
Thank you for sharing your beautifully skilled and truly enjoyable pen.
A poet's grateful hug to You! ⁓ Richard🍃
[now, where's that ice bucket?] ; )
Sheer luring loveliness … I've read a good portion of your excellent writings by now, and I must say your style is delightfully charming, captivating, easy to understand. And, quite habit-forming, to say the least.
You have a certain easy-going directness and wonderfully enjoyable technique to your writing, yet you word-paint vivid visuals into a smooth, energizing timbre in creating your luscious poetic moments … your expressions are a breath of fresh (albeit warm) air, almost a whisper in extremely enticing and satisfying poetic voice.
I see you have this one posted as "untitled," but you should consider "stimulation," because it easily does that to one's amorous senses.
I think you're a most wonderful writer, Ursa, whose work deserves to be published between its own covers.
Thank you for sharing your beautifully skilled and truly enjoyable pen.
A poet's grateful hug to You! ⁓ Richard🍃
[now, where's that ice bucket?] ; )
10th Dec 2021 2:16am
Richard, thank you for leaving such an incredibly sweet comment. I may need to copy it, frame it, placed so that it is the very first piece I see upon waking, and read every day for motivation and inspiration ;)
I don't think I could articulate who I want to be and where I want to go as a poet any clearer than you have done here for me; truly appreciated. Honoured.
warm hugs and hearts,
ursa 💜 💜
I don't think I could articulate who I want to be and where I want to go as a poet any clearer than you have done here for me; truly appreciated. Honoured.
warm hugs and hearts,
ursa 💜 💜
10th Dec 2021 2:58am
Gosh, Ursa 🌾
Such an enthralling reply from your lovely poetic lips swept sooo smoothly through my surprised senses ⁓ like warm, wet, velvet sighs.
Thank you for being You 💖
PS: I Have another review you may not have yet read; it's on your wondrously penned, "In the Kitchen" poem … just sayin. 😏
Such an enthralling reply from your lovely poetic lips swept sooo smoothly through my surprised senses ⁓ like warm, wet, velvet sighs.
Thank you for being You 💖
PS: I Have another review you may not have yet read; it's on your wondrously penned, "In the Kitchen" poem … just sayin. 😏
