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Hate My Life
I hate my life.
I want it to end.
I want out now.
Here I lie.
Without a friend.
Beat slowing down.
Collapsing into myself.
Falling down into hell.
Into eternal night.
Because I hate my life.
I want to die.
And die all alone.
Invisible.
No more I cry.
No more in this zone.
So criminal.
Collapsing into myself.
Falling down into hell.
Into eternal night.
Because I hate my life.
I want it to end.
I want out now.
Here I lie.
Without a friend.
Beat slowing down.
Collapsing into myself.
Falling down into hell.
Into eternal night.
Because I hate my life.
I want to die.
And die all alone.
Invisible.
No more I cry.
No more in this zone.
So criminal.
Collapsing into myself.
Falling down into hell.
Into eternal night.
Because I hate my life.
Published 23rd Nov 2021
Author's Note
A small one. Not a reflection of my actual mental state.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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16th Jan 2022 1:34am
I’m not normally a fan of depressing poems, but the rhyme and flow of this poem makes it an exception. Well done!
Also, I’m glad this is fiction.
Also, I’m glad this is fiction.
