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Pain Of True Submission
his
ritualistic
obsession
of pain to gather
the pleasures
they both sought
her bindfolded
bound and gagged
naked face down
she could hear nothing
say or see nothing
only feel a thudding heart
full
of
FEAR...
a beautiful
sight to behold
unblemished skin
awaiting the lash
that would write
his poetry of pain
lust desire in his eyes
surveying hot curvy
trenbling flesh
struggling whimpering
tears soaking the mask
with true understanding
of the
PAIN
to cone
a night
of dark pleasures
both woul feel
when the pain
inflicted had
subsided long ago
only
true
FREEDOM
to
CUM....
Published 21st Nov 2021
| Edited 30th Nov 2021
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22nd Nov 2021 9:09am
There's so much to unpack here.... The darkness eclipsed by his guiding hand.... testing the limits of each other's set boundaries.... is pure exhilaration... There's unmatched freedom in her relinquishing...... she knows he'll take her soaring into the abyss of sub space.....While she tries desperately not to call out.... the decided upon safe word.....So stubborn... She'll NEVER use it....not her...... not ever.
Just some of my thoughts and musings after reading....
🌹-💙
B
xo
-Excellent kinky spill, C
🔗 ⛓ - 🔥
Just some of my thoughts and musings after reading....
🌹-💙
B
xo
-Excellent kinky spill, C
🔗 ⛓ - 🔥
22nd Nov 2021 9:31am
A safe word
is really important
even if not used
but be aggreed each time
less its forgotten
is really important
even if not used
but be aggreed each time
less its forgotten
22nd Nov 2021 3:04pm
This needs to be run through a spell check, but for an erotic poem on this site, it's fairly subtle. Focusing on sensation and expectation as opposed to just graphic details. I liked that about it.
Rusted castles
She whispers the day to night nordamulus easier to campage Jack. Thankful😌
She whispers the day to night nordamulus easier to campage Jack. Thankful😌
