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A Slice of Cake
A slice of cake.
She hasn’t eaten in a while
She refuses with a shy
Bat of her eye
And tells her lies most vile.
Though later she cries
And says her goodbyes
To the pounds
And her thighs
And her genuine smile.
She hasn’t eaten in a while
She refuses with a shy
Bat of her eye
And tells her lies most vile.
Though later she cries
And says her goodbyes
To the pounds
And her thighs
And her genuine smile.
Published 17th Nov 2021
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18th Nov 2021 8:52pm
Dear Bella,
The palpable ache and heartfelt pained struggle is clear and profound. I wholly appreciate your bravely in sharing and truly hope you find a small bit of catharsis within each written word. ... Excellent work...
Welcome to DUP, lovely lady
🌹 - B
The palpable ache and heartfelt pained struggle is clear and profound. I wholly appreciate your bravely in sharing and truly hope you find a small bit of catharsis within each written word. ... Excellent work...
Welcome to DUP, lovely lady
🌹 - B
22nd Nov 2021 8:51am
31st Mar 2024 4:57pm
It's a profound piece that gives us a peek into what the mind feels as one suffers with this affliction.
