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Intentional Loss
You joke
poke
prod
laugh
scream
about losing yourself
but I do not see the point
purpose
reason
meaning
scheming
behind the curtain of your barred mind
I have tried
begged
pleaded
negotiated
for you to stay
live
breathe
be
but alas you deny yourself the right to see
believe
sense
hear
need
anything I say before three
I cannot handle
comprehend
stand
tolerate
bear
all this that you hand
pass
give
cast
upon me
I have taught you all that I can, go
leave
live
cry
ask
try
die?
it is not up to me
though as a last plea
I beg you
breathe
poke
prod
laugh
scream
about losing yourself
but I do not see the point
purpose
reason
meaning
scheming
behind the curtain of your barred mind
I have tried
begged
pleaded
negotiated
for you to stay
live
breathe
be
but alas you deny yourself the right to see
believe
sense
hear
need
anything I say before three
I cannot handle
comprehend
stand
tolerate
bear
all this that you hand
pass
give
cast
upon me
I have taught you all that I can, go
leave
live
cry
ask
try
die?
it is not up to me
though as a last plea
I beg you
breathe
Published 16th Nov 2021
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16th Nov 2021 3:57am
16th Nov 2021 11:21am
Thank you so much. It was very out of pocket- not that most of my work isn't but you get it
your words, i hear
your message, i understand
i liked the design of your lines
as if the sides of a coin.
your message, i understand
i liked the design of your lines
as if the sides of a coin.
17th Nov 2021 00:07am
this is the best comment I've gotten so far, thank you.
it's a shame I can never give this to the one I wrote it for, the last few lines may be too brash
it's a shame I can never give this to the one I wrote it for, the last few lines may be too brash
