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The Edge of Love
Standing on the edge of a rose
Blue storms of love
Haunt time
Saffron flames wherever I wilt
Blue storms of love
Haunt time
Saffron flames wherever I wilt
Published 14th Nov 2021
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Are you left with desire
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Lovely minimalism.... such beauty woven throughout the tenderness..... crisp lines, reflect the brevity....
I was drawn in –
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I was drawn in –
🌹-💙
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14th Nov 2021 6:02pm
14th Nov 2021 8:09pm
Blue storms and Saffron flames, really beautiful imagery William. I was definitely left with desire, ready to step over the edge completely immersed in your words. Lovely.
14th Nov 2021 8:22pm
