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Ode to my youngest brother.

Actually my kid brother
The youngest of our family
Of five boys is my hero.
Really.
Always positive, knows where he's going
No hesitation, full steam ahead
Went for officer training
Found that world cold and
Did not like the idea of giving
Commands which lead men to get killed,
Preferred to get back home,
See his sweetheart and get married.
He finished college at night
While working full time days
Then his first child was born.
Prematurely.
So: work days, visit at the hospital after,
Then school at  night
And all  over again the next day..
Bought a house.  Second kid.
He completed his B.A. in history
Wanted to become a teacher,
Had to do that year daytime of course,
No need to add that his wife helped greatly.
Two boys one daughter later
Now retiring after teaching
For twenty years in a difficult district.
Somewhere along the way, sold the house
Bought a B and B, now on sale.
He wants to travel.
I'm sure the details are all
Planned out already.
Written by robert43041 (Viking)
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Author's Note
For a competition. But my brother is the real thing indeed.
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