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Please come back to me
love that couldn't last
that has destroyed the past
a present lost and broken
and an apocalyptic future unfolding
we were fire and ice
freezing lust and desire
or oil and water
dousing flames with fire
drowning in self pity
leaving endless yearning
and sensual need
to caress you one last time
and feel you hot breath
blowing across my nipples
probing fingering of shocking fire
damn your memories
and curse your electricity
fuck I'm wet
thinking how much I hate you
how much I despise
what I felt with you inside me
squeezing your cock my thighs
just to rip the damn thing off
and I would laugh and cry
screaming how much I loved you
please come back to me
so I can hate you some more
that has destroyed the past
a present lost and broken
and an apocalyptic future unfolding
we were fire and ice
freezing lust and desire
or oil and water
dousing flames with fire
drowning in self pity
leaving endless yearning
and sensual need
to caress you one last time
and feel you hot breath
blowing across my nipples
probing fingering of shocking fire
damn your memories
and curse your electricity
fuck I'm wet
thinking how much I hate you
how much I despise
what I felt with you inside me
squeezing your cock my thighs
just to rip the damn thing off
and I would laugh and cry
screaming how much I loved you
please come back to me
so I can hate you some more
Published 12th Nov 2021
| Edited 13th Nov 2021
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12th Nov 2021 10:47pm
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12th Nov 2021 10:58pm
An alter ego Ms Jekyll and Hyde, I only hurt spiders. Hugs with you're not a spider.
12th Nov 2021 11:33pm
13th Nov 2021 8:48am
Feeling all these emotions at once let loose the hounds of insanity on this write. Thank you LDF.
13th Nov 2021 00:48am
Left brain, right brain, or yes Jekyll, Hyde, lust, anti lust…. Intense and awesome
13th Nov 2021 8:55am
Thank you NG, this poem was a challenge, reliving the emotions over and over again in editing. Never again [until the next time].
13th Nov 2021 6:18am
I agree with night goddess's comment! But yes very full and visceral. Nice write!
13th Nov 2021 9:01am
15th Nov 2021 00:53am
Wow, you display such powerful feelings with this back and forth of intense emotion. Like a moth drawn to the flame, sometimes toxic relationships can strongly attract until eventually dowsing flames with fire just leaves to many scars. And yet after tending the wounds there can still be the strong attraction to fly into the flames again and again. All the while hating the other person and oneself for doing so. Really impressive writing HoS.
15th Nov 2021 7:01pm
Does poetry drive us crazy or are we crazy and start writing poetry? Looking our whole lives for the right relationship and we just give up and settle for less or become toxic ourselves. I guess it's not the goal that counts but how we live the journey. And sometimes we win.
15th Nov 2021 6:39pm
