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Waves
I feel
the summer night
tangled in my hair
my nipples awaken
as the winds
whisper across
my naked flesh
my curious fingers
search my heat
delving between
my hungry lust
the craving
fills my warmth
the soft moans
fill my lungs
as the waves
come
one after another
gasping
shaking
quivering
in silhouette
I let the tide
carry me back
out to sea
awaiting another wave
the summer night
tangled in my hair
my nipples awaken
as the winds
whisper across
my naked flesh
my curious fingers
search my heat
delving between
my hungry lust
the craving
fills my warmth
the soft moans
fill my lungs
as the waves
come
one after another
gasping
shaking
quivering
in silhouette
I let the tide
carry me back
out to sea
awaiting another wave
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6th Nov 2021 12:07pm
Re. Waves
6th Nov 2021 1:03pm
this is really good.
i enjoyed it so.
how your words transport me.
a voyeur, if you will.
i enjoyed it so.
how your words transport me.
a voyeur, if you will.
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Re: Re. Waves
6th Nov 2021 1:18pm
Re. Waves
6th Nov 2021 1:20pm
the waves of those words
wash over you in these verses
and I enjoyed them
wash over you in these verses
and I enjoyed them
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6th Nov 2021 1:23pm
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6th Nov 2021 2:08pm
It definitely can carry one off to a place that is incredibly pleasant. Thank you dear one.
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6th Nov 2021 2:16pm
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6th Nov 2021 2:54pm
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Re. Waves
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Re: Re. Waves
11th Apr 2022 7:45am
Rhyming comment:
How tempting to stop by
to give the sea a try,
to baptise my body
wearing not a cossie.
(Such a poem gets me thinking of summer time at my favourite beach.)
How tempting to stop by
to give the sea a try,
to baptise my body
wearing not a cossie.
(Such a poem gets me thinking of summer time at my favourite beach.)
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Re. Waves
6th Nov 2021 7:38pm
This is so lusciously vivid in words and emotion.
Great picture painted and felt.
Great picture painted and felt.
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6th Nov 2021 7:59pm
Re. Waves
13th Nov 2021 4:41am
Nice write!
I enjoyed the imagery here.
Your word choice and line breaks worked great.
Very well written..good work!
I enjoyed the imagery here.
Your word choice and line breaks worked great.
Very well written..good work!
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13th Nov 2021 5:04am