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Planetary orbits explained
Oh, how stars do weep their light
to cry sparkling in the night
watching eternal desire
as the sun falls from heaven on fire
to endlessly chase earth's sensual embrace
yet earth demurely hides her face
with darkness and shadowy lace
using pale moonlight as her cover
nighttime is now her lover
to cry sparkling in the night
watching eternal desire
as the sun falls from heaven on fire
to endlessly chase earth's sensual embrace
yet earth demurely hides her face
with darkness and shadowy lace
using pale moonlight as her cover
nighttime is now her lover
Published 5th Nov 2021
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7th Nov 2021 6:29pm
17th Nov 2021 12:12pm
This is so beautiful and the rhyming is flawless with a wonderful flow. I was immersed into the the night. I love how the sensual expression of desire unfolds taking me to the stars bathed in the moonlight among the shadowy lace of darkness. I really enjoyed this a lot.
