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the carafe
The carafe
Bought a bottle
Of red wine.
It looks at me
I look at it.
Furiously.
It is empty now
threw it in the bin.
Who wants to?
Look at an empty
bottle
If you are not
a collector of labels
Bought a bottle
Of red wine.
It looks at me
I look at it.
Furiously.
It is empty now
threw it in the bin.
Who wants to?
Look at an empty
bottle
If you are not
a collector of labels
Published 30th Oct 2021
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31st Oct 2021 1:05am
31st Oct 2021 12:26pm
I like the personification of the bottle and the implementation of deeper insight via symbolism.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
