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YOU HOOKED ME
CAUGHT
I was swimming in
a sea of loneliness
about to drown in
my exhaustion of
trying to reach
the shores of love,
pleasure, and yes.
THEN,
from a distant shore
you threw out a
line and hooked me.
The line was multi-faceted:
colored by your beauty,
poetic words, and desires
to share eternity with
a fellow heart seeking
love, passion, and pleasure.
THANKS
for being on the shores
of my lonely world
and hooking me, no really
hooking us together.
Meet me at the Kissing Place
and we'll practice hooking together.
I was swimming in
a sea of loneliness
about to drown in
my exhaustion of
trying to reach
the shores of love,
pleasure, and yes.
THEN,
from a distant shore
you threw out a
line and hooked me.
The line was multi-faceted:
colored by your beauty,
poetic words, and desires
to share eternity with
a fellow heart seeking
love, passion, and pleasure.
THANKS
for being on the shores
of my lonely world
and hooking me, no really
hooking us together.
Meet me at the Kissing Place
and we'll practice hooking together.
Published 29th Oct 2021
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29th Oct 2021 1:14pm
29th Oct 2021 3:12pm
We spend too much time in that sea...would rather be at the kissing tree.. quality work here
31st Oct 2021 11:25am
