Doing better

Nice crisp write ... with such depth ... just the right amount of rhyme ...

Thank you, I appreciate it.

I hope all your pain subsides, great write
Love and light
Ron x

Thank you, I appreciate it.

Good to know that you are doing better now...hope you recuperate soon, dear poetess😊

Is this intended to be a haiku / senryu?
I like the progression of rhythmic feet--
from a 2 syllable foot, with a cretic substitution,
to a 3 syllable foot, rising,
to a 3 syllable foot, lilting--
That pattern / rhythmic texture compliments the dramatic / narrative shape, however brief--
Enjoyed!

Thank you, I appreciate it. I was trying but it took me awhile to get it down to just this. So I again appreciate it

Sending healing wishes for a speedy recovery! ✨ 💫 ✨



🌹 - B

Thank you, I appreciate it. I am doing better after all the injections and surgery. The pain isn't as intense now as it was.