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Insane
I feel insane as
My mind whispers, “Do it.”
I stare off into space, the
Somewhat sane part of me
Pleading, “No! Please, no more!”
But Insane drags the Blade across
My arm, Sane screaming for mercy.
I can’t decide who to listen to, knowing
Both of them can hurt me.
My mind whispers, “Do it.”
I stare off into space, the
Somewhat sane part of me
Pleading, “No! Please, no more!”
But Insane drags the Blade across
My arm, Sane screaming for mercy.
I can’t decide who to listen to, knowing
Both of them can hurt me.
Published 25th Oct 2021
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26th Oct 2021 10:46am
Loved your expression of the struggle many of us feel. I liked the turn at the end where you mentioned that both sane and insane can hurt us. How true.
27th Oct 2021 3:15am
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28th Oct 2021 3:15am
Thank you for reading my poem! I'm glad someone else can relate to it.
28th Oct 2021 5:23pm
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