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Down the Aisle
Heart don't fail me now
Faith can only hold me a while
I told her I'd walk another mile
That I'd walk her down the aisle
Faith can only hold me a while
I told her I'd walk another mile
That I'd walk her down the aisle
Published 15th Oct 2021
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15th Oct 2021 5:48am
Hello there and welcome to DU.
There’s something very off the cuff about this. Quite beatnik in its style. I love the lack of punctuation and how it doesn’t try to be anything else apart from what it is.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
There’s something very off the cuff about this. Quite beatnik in its style. I love the lack of punctuation and how it doesn’t try to be anything else apart from what it is.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
15th Oct 2021 6:24am
Love your comment. I have never thought about what style I write in. The truth is I'm not familiar with any styles. I have always more liked the thought of poetry than actually reading it. Most of it has felt to elitist for me. You inspired me to go explore beatnik
Any other tips welcome!
Any other tips welcome!
15th Oct 2021 7:32am
