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Touchy Subjects
"What's up reader-I have some shit to talk about
That might give a sensitive motherfucka the sour mouth,
"If easily offended then stop reading now
Stay connected to mama's titty and continue snacking on puppy chow,
"Michael Meyers and Jason-I classify as hackers
Out dated stale saltines I call them old crackers,
"A Chinese man dragged behind a station wagon
Now has a new nickname called Red Dragon,
"As sure as R-Kelly has a date with prison dick
Lip-locked and balls deep in a world of shit,
"At those 12 play moments he will wish he could fly
As a ruptured rectum will ignition ass cheeks to bloody cry,
"Many none priority blacks live in the projects
Only worrying about colored weave and getting their dick wet,
"No job, no dental plan-not a goddamn thing
Because to them a rolled blunt has the same value as a diamond ring,
"Negative shit about America other countries bitch a lot
But they wish they had five percent of what America got,
"Thinking America is the world's Walmart and always ready to shop
Relentlessly trying to cross it's borders and will never fucking stop,
"Fuck Trump racist ass when he was in the white house
But with these foreigners I see what he was talking about,
"Building a wall-that shit didn't stop Maria and Pablo
Because border patrol hands are tied like a sex trafficked ass ho',
"Now we have Biden aka Mr. Lost Memory
Who didn't know we had troops in Syria-are you fucking kidding me,
"Bringing Afghans over-giving them free housing and medical
My veteran ass is still struggling to get mine-motherfuckin pitiful,
"It's a pandemic, but stupid motherfuckas refuse to get vaccinated
Now many are in hospitals and won't make it,
"Even some vaccinated got the hook up on the ventilator
I guess covid will fuck all our asses sooner or later".
That might give a sensitive motherfucka the sour mouth,
"If easily offended then stop reading now
Stay connected to mama's titty and continue snacking on puppy chow,
"Michael Meyers and Jason-I classify as hackers
Out dated stale saltines I call them old crackers,
"A Chinese man dragged behind a station wagon
Now has a new nickname called Red Dragon,
"As sure as R-Kelly has a date with prison dick
Lip-locked and balls deep in a world of shit,
"At those 12 play moments he will wish he could fly
As a ruptured rectum will ignition ass cheeks to bloody cry,
"Many none priority blacks live in the projects
Only worrying about colored weave and getting their dick wet,
"No job, no dental plan-not a goddamn thing
Because to them a rolled blunt has the same value as a diamond ring,
"Negative shit about America other countries bitch a lot
But they wish they had five percent of what America got,
"Thinking America is the world's Walmart and always ready to shop
Relentlessly trying to cross it's borders and will never fucking stop,
"Fuck Trump racist ass when he was in the white house
But with these foreigners I see what he was talking about,
"Building a wall-that shit didn't stop Maria and Pablo
Because border patrol hands are tied like a sex trafficked ass ho',
"Now we have Biden aka Mr. Lost Memory
Who didn't know we had troops in Syria-are you fucking kidding me,
"Bringing Afghans over-giving them free housing and medical
My veteran ass is still struggling to get mine-motherfuckin pitiful,
"It's a pandemic, but stupid motherfuckas refuse to get vaccinated
Now many are in hospitals and won't make it,
"Even some vaccinated got the hook up on the ventilator
I guess covid will fuck all our asses sooner or later".
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Re. Touchy Subjects
13th Oct 2021 6:43pm
I suppose someone had to politically echo it… and who better else to express that global jargon righteously than you my poet.. You are so truthful in your musing and it is always a blessing to hear the ink spills from a prolific poet, rather it be about the economy, world related issues, or a controversial piece that needs to be spoken on or about.. no shame in the game when you spilling your fame.. honest rules in my eyes will always apply when I'm taking in by the gist of your composed mind.. enjoy your day as well
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13th Oct 2021 6:54pm
You know how I am, Raw and to the point. Many think it but are afraid to speak their mind. It could open up some eyes as well. Thanks for reading and commenting as always.
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13th Oct 2021 7:04pm
You are genuine and that holds more weight than gold... please continue to do what you do best, and you humbly welcome my love, always..
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13th Oct 2021 7:48pm
Went through it to make several corrections I missed so the real raw can flow better.
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13th Oct 2021 7:58pm
I think the message seeps through just beautifully but as a craftsman, he always has to make sure his work is of perfection.. no worries... you have outdid yourself... enjoy the remainder of your day...
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14th Oct 2021 4:28am
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13th Oct 2021 7:52pm
When some people get in certain positions of power their true self usually come out.
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13th Oct 2021 8:38pm
I don't think Biden is a racist .... I think he's too old, too meek, too ingrained into the politics versus wanting to get shit done, and too freaking moderate. HAVE SOME BALLS DUDE! is what I want to scream in his face.... almost daily.
I freely admit that I am a progressive liberal Democrat ....However, to me Biden was like drinking medicine that tastes like assholes licked assholes.... yet I backed him because there wasn't an alternative. Trump isn't worth the air he breathes, imo... so I won't even get started there.... I felt like we were totally lied to; left with an old man, who's been in politics his whole adult life not understanding how the American culture has changed, false claims of progressive views they tried to gloss over with Harris - because he was supposedly sooo open (which I don't think he was) to having Kamala as VP- which proved his willingness to be more progressive, right? (puhleeeease!) and is so antiquated he makes my own mother look like Elon Musk. The disappointment I feel now, being steam rollered by everyone and everything because we (as in Democrats) refuse to stand up... REFUSE to have a set of balls, by fighting for what we believe in, is mountainous. I feel worse and more defeated now than I ever did under the Trump regime... THAT is some sad ass shit to admit to.
As for covid deniers and anti vaxers.... basically science deniers, I wish it was only themselves or their own families that suffered on a ventilator only to end up passing away at the age of 40....due tho their despicable actions or lack thereof
I mean really?!? You're anti-vax because you don't believe in science or you're a propaganda believer, who seems to hate your fellow man?!.
and so it goes....
Smh.... Sorry for the vent, cs.
Your piece is incredibly awesome and I couldn't help myself... Thanks for being so freaking cool and brutally badass. I really love reading you and getting a sense of your thought processes....
Be well, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
I freely admit that I am a progressive liberal Democrat ....However, to me Biden was like drinking medicine that tastes like assholes licked assholes.... yet I backed him because there wasn't an alternative. Trump isn't worth the air he breathes, imo... so I won't even get started there.... I felt like we were totally lied to; left with an old man, who's been in politics his whole adult life not understanding how the American culture has changed, false claims of progressive views they tried to gloss over with Harris - because he was supposedly sooo open (which I don't think he was) to having Kamala as VP- which proved his willingness to be more progressive, right? (puhleeeease!) and is so antiquated he makes my own mother look like Elon Musk. The disappointment I feel now, being steam rollered by everyone and everything because we (as in Democrats) refuse to stand up... REFUSE to have a set of balls, by fighting for what we believe in, is mountainous. I feel worse and more defeated now than I ever did under the Trump regime... THAT is some sad ass shit to admit to.
As for covid deniers and anti vaxers.... basically science deniers, I wish it was only themselves or their own families that suffered on a ventilator only to end up passing away at the age of 40....due tho their despicable actions or lack thereof
I mean really?!? You're anti-vax because you don't believe in science or you're a propaganda believer, who seems to hate your fellow man?!.
and so it goes....
Smh.... Sorry for the vent, cs.
Your piece is incredibly awesome and I couldn't help myself... Thanks for being so freaking cool and brutally badass. I really love reading you and getting a sense of your thought processes....
Be well, my lovely friend 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
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14th Oct 2021 3:54am
When it come down to politics theses days I feel its a choice between two evils. Within a chaotic world sometimes the evil is the only thing that keeps people alive. Its sad but true. I appreciate your honest opinion and taking time to read.
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Hi dearest Casket I like your style not saying racist things won't make racism go away
I'm an artist and I think confronting things is better than buttoning up tight lipped looking stupidly at each other
so I like your style...
I don't like old Joe but he was chosen to be president evidently fate has had it's say
I'm worried like you that several problems could bring us to our knees
not talking about it won't make it go away...
I think shit's just begun to get popping off...
I worry about my grans stuck in the City...
I'm in the sticks loaded to bear...
but fuck me still there's still covid and who knows what else is coming...
not to mention I have some thoughts it I think it's germ warfare, scare tactics, etc.
some shady dealing high up makes me wonder even more about Joe's slant and ties...
peace to you may we find some....
I'm an artist and I think confronting things is better than buttoning up tight lipped looking stupidly at each other
so I like your style...
I don't like old Joe but he was chosen to be president evidently fate has had it's say
I'm worried like you that several problems could bring us to our knees
not talking about it won't make it go away...
I think shit's just begun to get popping off...
I worry about my grans stuck in the City...
I'm in the sticks loaded to bear...
but fuck me still there's still covid and who knows what else is coming...
not to mention I have some thoughts it I think it's germ warfare, scare tactics, etc.
some shady dealing high up makes me wonder even more about Joe's slant and ties...
peace to you may we find some....
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14th Oct 2021 4:11am
The truth is the truth. My intention was never to be a racist rant, because Im not racist myself I just have zero tolerance for the bullshit going on today no matter race, gender or religion. I just wish eyes would truly open. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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13th Oct 2021 8:51pm
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14th Oct 2021 4:13am
Like you say many think it but remain fucking brain dead while walking into covid covered brick wall. Thanks for the read and honest comment.
Re. Touchy Subjects
14th Oct 2021 1:48am
Is that a pissed off Shaggy from Scooby Do?
Actually you hit a lot of truth
Free Shit for foreigners
Nothing for the people who actually bled and died. Or got divorced. Or lost friends. Or couldn't take the dichotomy of entitled, crybaby BullShit that now runs the world
Let's not forget that tolerance only applies to certain folks
And if you merely disagree, not criticize, you get 8 million crybabies on your Facebook page
Fukk Em
You don't like what I say?
Knuckle Up
Or we can do ten paces at dawn
Easy to be brave when there is no blood or pain penalty waiting for you
Actually you hit a lot of truth
Free Shit for foreigners
Nothing for the people who actually bled and died. Or got divorced. Or lost friends. Or couldn't take the dichotomy of entitled, crybaby BullShit that now runs the world
Let's not forget that tolerance only applies to certain folks
And if you merely disagree, not criticize, you get 8 million crybabies on your Facebook page
Fukk Em
You don't like what I say?
Knuckle Up
Or we can do ten paces at dawn
Easy to be brave when there is no blood or pain penalty waiting for you
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14th Oct 2021 1:57am
hi dearest poet I just wanted to say hi to you tonight I agree with your sentiments I wrote a poem recently where I ended it with it's a beautiful world here for some...it's a solid write... have a good night to both of you💗
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14th Oct 2021 4:18am
Yeah even Shaggy is pissed. Lol. You know I write hard and raw no caring about criticism. Just be honest. Those in charge never are and when their shit is on full display they wanna change the fucking channel.
Where is Spartan law when you need it.
Where is Spartan law when you need it.
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18th Oct 2021 3:53pm
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25th Nov 2021 1:52pm
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26th Nov 2021 8:16am
Thank you. Just letting it be known. But on the real there are those who always want to shoot the messenger.