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orgasmic rush
eyes water
melting from the cold
heat sparking
trying to get us warm
stranded
another endless storm
we will weather it together
a little spice added to the sugar
mouths open in anticipated assault
more than mere passion but vigor
steam rising off the tip of the spoon
I'll be tasting you so so soon
insides await the embrace
every inch of desire to be traced
bodies blushing to the touch
heightened in pure orgasmic rush
melting from the cold
heat sparking
trying to get us warm
stranded
another endless storm
we will weather it together
a little spice added to the sugar
mouths open in anticipated assault
more than mere passion but vigor
steam rising off the tip of the spoon
I'll be tasting you so so soon
insides await the embrace
every inch of desire to be traced
bodies blushing to the touch
heightened in pure orgasmic rush
Published 12th Oct 2021
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14th Oct 2021 00:14am
At first I thought this as an ode to coffee or tea, (I have written a gazillion myself ; coffee is my lifeblood! ... lol). maybe the spoon reference... and I can't get that desirous love out of my head... I felt that tingle of teasing mouths and the anticipation of., consumption ... hearts beginning to pound... where that 'vigor' increases into more that fleeting thought.... to devouring..... feeling how rich and deep that 'rush' can be....
Just my thoughts.
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Maybe I need to drink less caffeine... ha!
Cheers! ☕
Thanks so much for a deliciously erotic and enjoyable read...
Regards,
🌹 - B
Just my thoughts.
...
Maybe I need to drink less caffeine... ha!
Cheers! ☕
Thanks so much for a deliciously erotic and enjoyable read...
Regards,
🌹 - B
14th Oct 2021 00:30am
Lol...to be fair I was drinking coffee while writing this...thanks Bluevelvete
