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passionate breeze
it was in her fire he had found the flame
dancing to the beat of the hunted
a desire that couldn't be tamed
burning so hot but oh so cool
held in close captivity
night eloping with day
entranced
taken by hand
a delicate touch
reaching for the gibbous moon
shielded but uncloaked
to the naked mind
she had other things in mind
leading on a path to unwind
a flower, under a star, by a tree
just her and he
living
in a pure passionate breeze
dancing to the beat of the hunted
a desire that couldn't be tamed
burning so hot but oh so cool
held in close captivity
night eloping with day
entranced
taken by hand
a delicate touch
reaching for the gibbous moon
shielded but uncloaked
to the naked mind
she had other things in mind
leading on a path to unwind
a flower, under a star, by a tree
just her and he
living
in a pure passionate breeze
Published 5th Oct 2021
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5th Oct 2021 10:49pm
So in tune with one another…
“night eloping with day”
Beautifully passionate breeze…passionate write
NG🌹
“night eloping with day”
Beautifully passionate breeze…passionate write
NG🌹
6th Oct 2021 3:41pm
5th Oct 2021 11:13pm
6th Oct 2021 3:42pm
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6th Oct 2021 3:42pm
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- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
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6th Oct 2021 1:23pm
Really beautiful and sensual. Oh yes! she burns hot but what a beautiful captivity. I love the contrast of 'night eloping the day' with such all encompassing passion. 🔥
That last stanza is definitely dreamy. Such a wonderful write.
That last stanza is definitely dreamy. Such a wonderful write.
6th Oct 2021 3:45pm
