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COVERED EYES
A fake smile
covers the eyes and conceals true feelings.
Clean wrists, now stained
remain.
Reminders of the past.
Memories linger
like the smell of booze.
Booze that destroys thoughts, only to return in the morning.
Haunting, covered by a fake smile.
Published 5th Oct 2021
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5th Oct 2021 2:04am
10th Oct 2021 5:29am
7th Oct 2021 11:35am
Yes. I like this poem.
Honesty. relatability.
You have a skilled and pleasant manner
of arranging your words.
Very nicely done.
Honesty. relatability.
You have a skilled and pleasant manner
of arranging your words.
Very nicely done.
10th Oct 2021 5:30am
thank you archie for not only reading but commenting on my poem. it means a lot to me.
