deepundergroundpoetry.com
Endeavour (Rondolet)
I haven’t been
to heaven in my final breath
I haven’t been
to witness calm sewn into skin
eat poison, dance from destined death
drape cloth upon these infants left
I haven’t been.
to heaven in my final breath
I haven’t been
to witness calm sewn into skin
eat poison, dance from destined death
drape cloth upon these infants left
I haven’t been.
Published 3rd Oct 2021
Author's Note
For the Rondolet Competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 1
comments 3
reads 324
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
4th Oct 2021 00:39am
Dear U,
Well done and all the best in the comp.
I really liked the darker aspect of this write with life after death, calm sewn into skin, eat poison…totally dig that. Because it’s true, so many things unknown we’ve not experienced especially the chapter that comes after “the end”. Hmmmm
Terrific piece. H🌷
Well done and all the best in the comp.
I really liked the darker aspect of this write with life after death, calm sewn into skin, eat poison…totally dig that. Because it’s true, so many things unknown we’ve not experienced especially the chapter that comes after “the end”. Hmmmm
Terrific piece. H🌷
4th Oct 2021 2:06pm
Dear H,
This was an interesting one for me to write. The first time in this form, I think I really like it! The subject, here, hoping it can be taken in many ways, allowing to reader to take from it what they want. I appreciate your perspective, your comment as always.
sincerely,
ursa 💜
This was an interesting one for me to write. The first time in this form, I think I really like it! The subject, here, hoping it can be taken in many ways, allowing to reader to take from it what they want. I appreciate your perspective, your comment as always.
sincerely,
ursa 💜
13th Oct 2021 11:13pm
