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I want if I can
I want if I can
to travel the land
before I lay down
and sleep deep
in eternal rest
I want to touch
the white ivory sands
of beaches around
the world
feeling it among my toes
I want to lay down
under the shadow of the pyramids
and wonder at the ingenuity
of past Kings and Queens
and dream
I want to roam
on vast green fields
where fairies lived
in the days of yore
feel the tall lush swaying grass
I want to wander
in the market place
everywhere in the world
and savour sights and sounds
of the crowds
But most of all
I want to do all these
with you, my intended
who are you...where?
Come to me now....
to travel the land
before I lay down
and sleep deep
in eternal rest
I want to touch
the white ivory sands
of beaches around
the world
feeling it among my toes
I want to lay down
under the shadow of the pyramids
and wonder at the ingenuity
of past Kings and Queens
and dream
I want to roam
on vast green fields
where fairies lived
in the days of yore
feel the tall lush swaying grass
I want to wander
in the market place
everywhere in the world
and savour sights and sounds
of the crowds
But most of all
I want to do all these
with you, my intended
who are you...where?
Come to me now....
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29th Feb 2012 11:36pm
desires....
29th Feb 2012 11:58pm
i desire to be free
as i find my destiny
who will unite with me
for all eternity
so that true Love we will see
in all we do...is it thee....;)
as i find my destiny
who will unite with me
for all eternity
so that true Love we will see
in all we do...is it thee....;)
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re: desires....
1st Mar 2012 6:29am
desires
to fly the sky's highway
and swim the oceans thoroughfare
such is freedom.
Thank you goodest for reading and commenting.
to fly the sky's highway
and swim the oceans thoroughfare
such is freedom.
Thank you goodest for reading and commenting.
re: Another gem
1st Mar 2012 12:28pm
Beautiful
1st Mar 2012 3:33am
re: Beautiful
1st Mar 2012 12:29pm
Thank you kindly Scattered_thoughts. It is very kind of you to read and comment on the poem.
Ok
1st Mar 2012 8:45am
re: Ok
1st Mar 2012 12:30pm
re: re: Ok
1st Mar 2012 7:33pm
zooming with pedal to the metal in top gear with turbo on full boost , as we speak lmao
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1st Mar 2012 9:03pm
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1st Mar 2012 2:37pm
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1st Mar 2012 4:10pm
THIS IS A WINNER!!!!!
Anonymous
4th Mar 2012 3:50am
The ability to use words in the most beautiful ways show through clearly in this lovely poem.
Kitty
Kitty
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re: THIS IS A WINNER!!!!!
4th Mar 2012 4:16am