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When silence reigns
When silence reigns
Snow falls on a freshly dug grave
When silence reigns
My memory goes back to pain
That horrible night I found you
Needing peace from a troubled mind
When silence reigns
Snow falls on a freshly dug grave
When silence reigns
My memory goes back to pain
That horrible night I found you
Needing peace from a troubled mind
When silence reigns
Published 28th Sep 2021
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A reworking of another poem.
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28th Sep 2021 6:47pm
I tend to become silent when I’m in pain; it’s definitely my loudest scream, but no one ever hears.
Eventually, I rise up from lying on the floor in a pool of tears, and keep moving forward.
Love the brevity but depth found here in your write…
Eventually, I rise up from lying on the floor in a pool of tears, and keep moving forward.
Love the brevity but depth found here in your write…
28th Sep 2021 8:15pm
13th Oct 2021 11:07pm
Silence definitely has that eerie feeling with certain situations. I enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for participating in the comp.
LJ
LJ
15th Oct 2021 10:29pm
