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Rejuvenating

It's all about this heart
How it was torn �
when the hatred was born � �
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It's time to empathize � �
but not even to despise �
to the ones who hurt me once �
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It's time to forgive � �
the one who was mean � �
when I was smiling at him � � �
��
Are you in heaven, my dear? � �
I would love to emphasize � �
Let go all of the despise �
�
I am rejuvenating

Written by RoseJasmine

Published 25th Sep 2021 | Edited 1st Nov 2021

Author's Note

I am free...

#forgiveness

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flowergirl

25th Sep 2021 8:24pm

Awe Rose��..beautiful painful words��.a lesson I�ve recently experienced��.life isn�t always about forgiving others but forgiving yourself too��.peacefulness that touches our souls when we are able to forgive is wonderful��.you�re soul is beautiful��.hope you find the peace your searching for��.thought provoking ink��.enjoyed much��.purple luv & hugs xo :)

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RoseJasmine

27th Sep 2021 1:54pm

Thank you my dear friend for the nice feedback.

Love,
Jasmine

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Honoria

26th Sep 2021 00:22am

Dear RJ,

Ditto flowergirl. And what I loved about your poem was the theme of forgiveness. To they who perpetrated the hurt and to ourselves. Letting go and being free. This is a wonderful concept throughout the write. Beautiful piece. H🌷