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Vibratory Pentacles
It seems every one
is
trying
to show
They are
the
adult
in
the room,
While
I
Just want to
be
the
Mage
in
the
woods,
or
the night stalker
Stalking
the
Night
Yeah…
Just like that.
Just
Right.
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- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
24th Sep 2021 1:21pm
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Re: Re. Vibratory Pentacles
26th Sep 2021 1:47pm
Hahaha.
Now I feel inspired to record myself laughing...
but it has to be my Night Stalker laugh.
Your words are deeply appreciate R.
Now I feel inspired to record myself laughing...
but it has to be my Night Stalker laugh.
Your words are deeply appreciate R.
Re. Vibratory Pentacles
24th Sep 2021 2:09pm
Dear CO,
I think we can all agree I would never be mistaken for the adult in the room but…the idea of roaming the woods and owning mystical wisdom and some magical powers…sounds abso-f*cking-lutely divine. Every word of this poem is pure gorgeousness. H🌷
I think we can all agree I would never be mistaken for the adult in the room but…the idea of roaming the woods and owning mystical wisdom and some magical powers…sounds abso-f*cking-lutely divine. Every word of this poem is pure gorgeousness. H🌷
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Re: Re. Vibratory Pentacles
26th Sep 2021 1:50pm
I think people of your sort are the true "adults in the room", to be honest, H.
but you know how society is... (or maybe I just see things differently? that is entirely possible.)
It does sound absolutely-f*cking-lutely divine!
:)))
You are awesome for that.
You are beautiful H.
Beautiful.
but you know how society is... (or maybe I just see things differently? that is entirely possible.)
It does sound absolutely-f*cking-lutely divine!
:)))
You are awesome for that.
You are beautiful H.
Beautiful.
Re. Vibratory Pentacles
24th Sep 2021 2:16pm
Quite abstract structure to this write Cipher it really has some compelling visuals that really gives this penning a modern contemporary feel my favorite part was the NightStalker stanza...reminds me of Richie Ramirez creeping up through windows and hiding in the shadows..very smooth structured brevity...😁👍🍷🍷Cheers Brother
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Re: Re. Vibratory Pentacles
26th Sep 2021 1:51pm
Re. Vibratory Pentacles
24th Sep 2021 6:04pm
Your poem reminds me of one of my favorite quotes, "And into the forest I go, to lose my mind and find my soul"
Lovely ink :)
Lovely ink :)
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Re: Re. Vibratory Pentacles
26th Sep 2021 1:53pm
Re. Vibratory Pentacles
25th Sep 2021 1:24am
Re: Re. Vibratory Pentacles
26th Sep 2021 1:53pm
Re. Vibratory Pentacles
25th Sep 2021 12:03pm
Oooh, I do like this.... definitely not interested in being the Adult, but I could go for something like the Crazy Sage Laughing in the Treetops.
I bet we could populate an entire forest with poetry misfits...
I love how your sparse style just gently plants this idea so we can all run with it. Nicely done.
k
I bet we could populate an entire forest with poetry misfits...
I love how your sparse style just gently plants this idea so we can all run with it. Nicely done.
k
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Re: Re. Vibratory Pentacles
26th Sep 2021 1:56pm
Now I definitely have to record a "Crazy Sage Laughing in the Treetops" recording...
Oh... it's happening...
haha.
Yes... I dig that idea tremendously. An entire forest with poetry misfits.
[I love how your sparse style just gently plants this idea so we can all run with it. Nicely done.]
That's a very cool thing to say.
Deepest appreciation.
Oh... it's happening...
haha.
Yes... I dig that idea tremendously. An entire forest with poetry misfits.
[I love how your sparse style just gently plants this idea so we can all run with it. Nicely done.]
That's a very cool thing to say.
Deepest appreciation.