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Or Absorbtion Of Her Sorrow
i dive deep into
your sorrow ~ soaking up each
tear ~ of pain inside
Published 20th Sep 2021
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 4:45am
20th Sep 2021 10:22am
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20th Sep 2021 7:09pm
love the digging deep love~ laden love.. breathing moist delicate.. in those bonding all & nil..weaving even the tears n pain ..
so much poetic depths n melancholic beauty , adored poet :)
so much poetic depths n melancholic beauty , adored poet :)
21st Sep 2021 6:11am
Your ability to write the most relevant, tender and moving senryú, really impresses and blows me away. I hope that one day I'm able to finesse and emote with as much beautiful creativity...
The formatting is spot on, too!! 👍🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
The formatting is spot on, too!! 👍🏻
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
22nd Sep 2021 9:42am
