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Her eyes
she had that look
about her
a look
of a dreamer
dark eyes
that see
much too far
her stripped thoughts
find their way
to the end
and wander off
the edge
of the earth
about her
a look
of a dreamer
dark eyes
that see
much too far
her stripped thoughts
find their way
to the end
and wander off
the edge
of the earth
Published 19th Sep 2021
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19th Sep 2021 2:59am
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19th Sep 2021 4:09am
Dear JC,
Your poem is lovely. It gave me a billowy feeling of quiet prescience in describing the subject. Welcome to DU and great write.
H🌷
Your poem is lovely. It gave me a billowy feeling of quiet prescience in describing the subject. Welcome to DU and great write.
H🌷
19th Sep 2021 4:13am
