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Setting It Free (It Seems To Hang On)
“I love you, love you, love you
Shouting it out shouting it out”
I can't stop it.......(this snowball rolling down the hill)
(The thoughts of you take my breath away)
dying to have you in my arms
around the world in a day,
just one minute, just one hour
and I just can't help myself......
…...I have no right to cross that sacred line,
quickly becoming that dangerous “blurred line”
(If loving you is wrong.......)
but God help me , I love you anyway and I'm about to
lose my mind
“I've just go to get a message to you
Hold on, hold on
One more hour and my life will be through
Hold on, hold on “
(If I can't have you)
watching the bubbles of emotion
rise just beneath the skin
between the both of us
the reckless abandon
caring not the wages of our sin
( Kissing you is all that I've been thinking of )
“I gotta' have you......”
That's the way I feel about you....
Standing on the verge,
ready to let go
Safety be damned
ready to let the world know that.......
“…....I love you, love you, love you
Shouting it out shouting it out”
I can't stop it
The thoughts of you are stealing my very breath away...
Published 18th Sep 2021
Author's Note
.....seeing her face today, parked squarely on the 13th floor 💓💓💓
"I've Just Gotta' Get a Message To You" by The Bee Gees
"I've Just Gotta' Get a Message To You" by The Bee Gees
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18th Sep 2021 11:17pm
Sometimes you just want to scream how you feel with the tips of your toes to the top of your head and every surface in-between.
19th Sep 2021 00:44am
Exactly......glad these words captured exactly what I was feeling. My dear friend Bonzi, you do "get" me when no one else does 😉🙂
19th Sep 2021 2:15am
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