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Higher
What's the point of writing if not being true to self?
What's the point of living if traveling in stealth?
If the pursuit of wealth is your one & only cause
Then the game is over and you've already loss
Lost in the sauce and needing to pause for intermission
To reevaluate your secular decisions through reflection
Pay me no attention; I'll just preach to the choir
Then, with a unified mission, we'll levitate higher
What's the point of living if traveling in stealth?
If the pursuit of wealth is your one & only cause
Then the game is over and you've already loss
Lost in the sauce and needing to pause for intermission
To reevaluate your secular decisions through reflection
Pay me no attention; I'll just preach to the choir
Then, with a unified mission, we'll levitate higher
Published 18th Sep 2021
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18th Sep 2021 9:58am
Absolutely
When the destination is the only goal, the beauty of the journey is wasted
Very profound, Sir Damon
When the destination is the only goal, the beauty of the journey is wasted
Very profound, Sir Damon
20th Sep 2021 4:18am
One thing is for certain two for sure; the choir will definitely elevate the sound, Damon. It's not the destination that matters but the journey itself.
3rd Oct 2021 9:48pm
The sound towards the end goal gets higher but don't let it become a distraction overriding the journey itself.
7th Oct 2021 2:57pm
A wonderful poem and a great rhyming rhythm, except ,if I am being honest, one stanza?
"Lost in the sauce and needing to pause for intermission
To reevaluate your secular decisions through reflection"
I can kinda feel where you are going but I felt the beat change, could just be me?
Love the overall theme!
"Lost in the sauce and needing to pause for intermission
To reevaluate your secular decisions through reflection"
I can kinda feel where you are going but I felt the beat change, could just be me?
Love the overall theme!
17th Oct 2021 2:45am
