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9/16/21
Rain fills the desert
Whose years of tightly held salt
Bloom to the surface
SALT FLOWERS
Whose years of tightly held salt
Bloom to the surface
SALT FLOWERS
Published 17th Sep 2021
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17th Sep 2021 2:36am
You have such a refreshing outlook with they way you beautifully manipulate your words; I can truly see an entire picture with less than more.. that is a rare gift my poet... do enjoy your evening as well
17th Sep 2021 2:39am
17th Sep 2021 2:41am
Anonymous
17th Sep 2021 9:44am
A beautiful image, that makes me curious to know if this phenomenon is based on reality.
So I looked it up, and learned something new.
Thanks!
So I looked it up, and learned something new.
Thanks!
17th Sep 2021 5:22pm
Yeah, I had seen an article about it and that is what prompted the poem. Such a potent metaphor, in my opinion.
